Night Mistress

sure. that sounds like a great idea.

okay.

You're colors are confusing. Plus some of that is from the movie. what i did was: i took the movie's plot line and just add my owm character to the ...

I can't create character with flaws and anything that make them relateable.

Everyone is different.

I'm talking about my other work. i was thinking i should have never branch out and stuck to fanfiction, because that appears to be what i'm good at.

Yeah. i was piss when i found that out.

it's interesting!

thank you very much. I hope you all will stay tune for the next chapter.

too late now. i edited it a little bit.

but if i don't it immediately, i will have everyone breathing down my neck about the same things. and same goes for the other chapters. so, i might as well ...

I don't feel like re-type it.

but i took all that courage to to put something back up here.

okay. is it a little better then before?

try spacing out everything. that way it not smash up together like that.